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Post by tor on Feb 4, 2024 17:41:50 GMT -6
#s://i~ibb~co/G2gWhXV/heronpaw~jpg Early morning in the prairie was beautiful, with the fragile dawn casting pink light across muted meadows. Heronpaw tucked his tail tightly around his paws as he watched the sun continue to rise. The grass glittered in the sun's presence, coated with late leaf-bare frost, promising a chilly day. Strange, that he couldn't feel the cold right now. He thought maybe it was the anticipation of the morning running warm under his pelt. Cinderstar asked him to help. He couldn't believe it. Cinderstar, who never once paid him much attention, came to him late the previous evening and asked if he wouldn't mind tutoring one of the younger apprentices. Coyotepaw and his mentor were to meet him at the sparring grounds a little after dawn, for some training before the regular apprentice training began. "You'd meet for a few days. Maybe half a moon. Help him shape up."Heronpaw didn't really like the idea of helping him shape up. He only knew of Coyotepaw's struggles a little - there'd been a fight, before he was even apprenticed? Wheatpaw was involved. He wanted to know more, so he could figure out exactly how he fit into helping Coyotepaw improve as a future warrior. Cinderstar had little to share, though. Just that Coyotepaw's mentor had come to her asking for advice. He hoped he would do right by them all. Especially Coyotepaw. No apprentice deserved to be treated like they were beyond help. The crunch of frozen grass caught his attention. Heronpaw turned and dipped his head in greeting to Coyotepaw and his mentor, before sitting up straighter. "Good morning. It's cold. Watch your step on any ice."- ooc: i know coyotepaw's new mentor is still a WIP, so we can just npc him for now?
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Post by adrian on Feb 10, 2024 16:01:15 GMT -6
#s://i~ibb~co/x79vLh0/coyotepaw~png A moon passed. Coyotepaw no longer waited for Wheatpaw to leave the den first, for fear of engaging with him, in part because his slight growth spurt gave him enough confident that he could make the other tom regret it if their spats got too intense. And his newest mentor had not bailed on him yet, despite him giving him plenty of reasons to. Brackenthorn was there in the fields already when he arrived. It was early - and cold, but he wouldn't admit it. "So?" he asked. "What are we doing out here?"He knew Brackenthorn was up to something, after the incident a few days prior. Coyotepaw didn't mean to injure the apprentice he was sparring with. He just wanted to win more than the other apprentice did. Brackenthorn called his strategies cheap shots. Coyotepaw called it being strong enough to take care of himself. His mentor now said, "We're meeting an older apprentice, to assist in your fighting form." Who? Coyotepaw wondered. Wouldn't it be a riot if it was Wheatpaw? Only, it annoyed him to think of Wheatpaw helping him because his attitude made him too difficult to train without assistance. Ugh, hopefully it wasn't him. "Maybe he'll knock some sense into you."
"Have you considered that I might win a spar against an older apprentice?" he asked, a little defiant. "It hadn't escaped my imagination," Brackenthorn responded, sounding tired, but maybe amused, too. "There he is, now."Coyotepaw followed his gesture to the edge of the field where he came from. He barely knew this apprentice, but he knew his name was Heronpaw, and that he had a number of friends who he was pretty sure had never once looked at him. "Good morning. It's cold. Watch your step on any ice."He'd make the ice break beneath his paws before he slipped on it in front of a clan born apprentice. His mentor made the greetings and formal introductions, on the case that they weren't well acquainted (they weren't), and then stepped away a few paces as if to let Heronpaw take charge. "Heard you're here to knock sense in to me," he said, tone neutral. "Try it, then." His eyes narrowed. "I'm more than ready for you."ooc: yeah i'm just borrowing him and then letting him fade to the sidelines lol
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Post by tor on Feb 12, 2024 21:48:19 GMT -6
#s://i~ibb~co/G2gWhXV/heronpaw~jpg Bewilderingly, as Heronpaw sat and listened to Brackenthorn formally introduce Coyotepaw, as well as explain what they were doing here, Heronpaw got the sense that Coyotepaw had a problem with him. He wondered what it was, trying to shove down the instinct that said it was because Coyotepaw knew of his father's heritage. So few cats dared mention it to Heronpaw's face. He wasn't sure if was because being several generations removed from his kittypet grandfather excused him from that lineage, or if no one wanted to remind him that Silversong was his father. As he was much younger that him, Heronpaw really doubted Coyotepaw's attitude had anything to do with him personally. No, he soothed himself with the thought that Coyotepaw just didn't want to be here. That it didn't matter who his tutor was - he would be stormy with them regardless. " Heard you're here to knock sense in to me." Heronpaw narrowed his eyes. Was that how it was explained to Coyotepaw? "Try it, then. I'm more than ready for you."A terrible competitive urge kicked in at Coyotepaw's challenge. Heronpaw felt torn between reassuring the younger apprentice that he was here to help, and giving Coyotepaw the exact lashing he seemed to expect. In the end, the desire to win, the same desire that spurred to life whenever he sparred with a friend, kicked in, and Heronpaw easily fell into a skirmish crouch. "Very well," he said. "Show me what you're made of."
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Post by adrian on Feb 17, 2024 12:41:49 GMT -6
#s://i~ibb~co/x79vLh0/coyotepaw~png Nothing about Heronpaw's tone or posture betrayed what he was thinking. Was he annoyed that he had to come deal with a younger apprentice? Did he think he was better than him, too good to be wasting his time here? Coyotepaw couldn't tell. It didn't matter anyway. It wasn't like he asked for help. "Very well," Heronpaw said, getting into a crouch that drew a pleased grin from him. "Show me what you're made of."Coyotepaw was good at fighting. Fighting, not sparring. He was good at defending himself and reminding anyone who bothered him that his bite was just as bad as his bark. When he trained, he was unpolished. Scrappy. Rude, even, in how he approached sparring with his mentor and the other apprentices. But those instincts were usually enough for him to win. And he loved winning. There was a thrill in knowing that he was stronger than the apprentices his age, and perhaps some of the older ones, too. Besides, trading a few feeble strikes wasn't nearly the show of respect that slamming his body against his tutor was. If Heronpaw was good enough to be helping him, then he'd be able to take it. So he charged forward, intent on using force and the element of surprise to his advantage. This was his element, much more so than getting along with his clan mates was.
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Post by tor on Feb 21, 2024 11:33:03 GMT -6
#s://i~ibb~co/G2gWhXV/heronpaw~jpg Heronpaw was not expecting Coyotepaw to charge at him. It was only extensive practice - he sent a quiet thanks to Spottedpaw - that he was able to dodge out of the way, unaccustomed to apprentices simply charging at him. For an apprentice of his size, Coyotepaw clearly had a lot of strength under his dark tabby pelt. A hit from him would knock Heronpaw off his feet if he wasn't careful. Swinging around, Heronpaw readied himself for Coyotepaw's next steps. There seemed to be no strategy in his movements. No plans. Coyotepaw simply flung himself at Heronpaw wildly. He avoided the next tackle, too, thanks to his agile limbs, then readied himself for the offensive. Carefully - so, so carefully, he'd never want to hurt a young apprentice, nor would he want to fail Cinderstar and Swiftwind by messing this up - Heronpaw leapt at Coyotepaw, determined to pin him on his side using Coyotepaw's own momentum as leverage, in hopes to demonstrate the fault of launching wildly into combat.
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Post by adrian on May 4, 2024 8:18:22 GMT -6
#s://i~ibb~co/x79vLh0/coyotepaw~png Coyotepaw charged passed Heronpaw, and then used his momentum to turn on his paws and rush the older apprentice again. He missed, again, and let out an almost-growl that was in part frustration and part the thrill of the chase. Fine, he could charge all day. All he needed was for Heronpaw to misjudge his steps one time, and then he'd be on him, and most apprentices were surprised by his weight. Though young looking now, his accumulating muscle suggested he would be doing some growing later on. He lunged forward into another charge, but this time, Heronpaw didn't just narrowly dodge him. He leapt, causing Coyotepaw to stop abruptly in his tracks and then get unceremoniously knocked onto his side with a soft "oof." Pinned down like this, he couldn't really use his back legs to kick up hard like he might have in another spar, but he did twist around and snap, "Get off me."
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Post by tor on May 4, 2024 8:50:40 GMT -6
#s://i~ibb~co/G2gWhXV/heronpaw~jpg Almost flawlessly, Heronpaw was able to get Coyotepaw pinned to the ground, held in such a way that he couldn't kick back. The other apprentice made a sound like air rushing from his lungs, but other than that didn't seem injured. Heronpaw didn't let his relief relax him. He would hold Coyotepaw here a moment longer, even as the other apprentice was demanding to be let go. "If I let you go," he said, voice even. "Will you continue to charge wildly?"Likely, the answer was yes. Heronpaw himself learned to fight like that once. It wasn't effective. Slowly, he got off of Coyotepaw as requested, and took a few steps back. "Try again, this time with intention." Except, Coyotepaw probably had intention already - he wanted to win the spar. "And then, when you fail, you can describe your intention to me and I'll correct it."
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Post by adrian on May 4, 2024 9:08:35 GMT -6
#s://i~ibb~co/x79vLh0/coyotepaw~png "If I let you go, will you continue to charge wildly?" Yes. Probably. Coyotepaw let out another frustrated growl that quickly dissipated into a mildly offended huff. Yes, he used surprise and unexpected bulk to his advantage, so what? It worked more often than he imagined the older apprentice suspected. To his own credit, he didn't immediately charge like a bull the moment Heronpaw released him. Instead, he shook himself to dislodge any dust that accumulated on his pelt and stepped back to make some room between them. He wasn't done, even if he wasn't launching himself at Heronpaw again just yet, and he hoped he knew it. "Try again, this time with intention." He scoffed. He had intention: to win the spar. "And then, when you fail, you can describe your intention to me and I'll correct it."Oh, okay, new intention: to win the spar and also to knock Heronpaw flat on his back the moment he had the opportunity to. With that in mind, he leapt at him again, barely giving him time to finish speaking.
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Post by tor on May 4, 2024 9:19:42 GMT -6
#s://i~ibb~co/G2gWhXV/heronpaw~jpg Heronpaw saw the moment Coyotepaw decided to do exactly what he'd been doing before. He refrained from rolling his eyes. It was prideful of him, and thus he'd never speak the words out loud, but Heronpaw really didn't mind showing the younger apprentice his mistakes like this. He was young. Inexperienced. He was supposed to be bad at this, and Heronpaw, the older apprentice, should be better. At least, that was how he justified it when Coyotepaw leapt at him, the last words he spoke barely out of his mouth. Nimble, Heronpaw was easily able to dart away from the maneuver. He dug his claws into the training ground dirt to hold himself steady and not move too far, then lunged back at Coyotepaw. After his last leap, the other apprentice was too accessible. His back was turned to him. Some degree of honor kept Heronpaw from striking until Coyotepaw had caught up with his momentum and turned to face him. Then, he leapt. To the left. Not where Coyotepaw was. And, predictably, Coyotepaw dried to dodge, ending up right in Heronpaw's path.
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Post by adrian on May 4, 2024 9:44:29 GMT -6
#s://i~ibb~co/x79vLh0/coyotepaw~png Part of him expected to miss. And it was even more annoying to be proven right. No other apprentice had so easily outmaneuvered him; but then, he usually sparred within his age group, or with Wheatpaw, who was blinded by how arrogant and moody he was. Heronpaw was the first older apprentice to not be just picking a fight with him for giggles. Well. Maybe. It was hard to say. He didn't know Heronpaw. Maybe he'd mock him when their mentors were out of sight. Heronpaw leapt again, and with a sense of determination, Coyotepaw stepped to the side to dodge him and hopefully counter with his own strike. Instead, to his surprise, Heronpaw ended up on top of him again, knocking him back and causing him to hiss in irritation. This was a size advantage. If he was just a little bigger, he wouldn't be knocked around like this. And he hated it.
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Post by tor on May 4, 2024 9:58:03 GMT -6
#s://i~ibb~co/G2gWhXV/heronpaw~jpg Coyotepaw hissed when he went down. Instinctively, Heronpaw slid off him after his maneuver was complete, choosing not to pin him for long this time. Part of him was concerned he had hurt Coyotepaw. It wasn't the best angle to come down on another cat - had one of Coyotepaw's limbs gotten trapped under him? As he stepped back, watching Coyotepaw shake himself off, Heronpaw realized it was just the other apprentice's ego that was hurt. To be expected, he thought. He didn't realize I'd seen his dodge. Coyotepaw was what, seven moons? Most of the apprentices his age weren't fighting at Heronpaw's skill level. "Are you alright?" He asked, mostly just to be polite, knowing full well the answer would be some snarky comment. Or worse, Coyotepaw might brush off his concern entirely. "May I guess your intention?" He continued. "When you leapt at me, you wanted to beat me. That was all? Did you think, 'I must strike at his left side, because he favors it,' or something along those lines?"
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Post by adrian on May 4, 2024 10:15:52 GMT -6
#s://i~ibb~co/x79vLh0/coyotepaw~png "I'm fine." He didn't mean to snap. But he wasn't the breakable kitty-pet everyone expected him to be. Maybe he didn't like being pushed into the dirt and grass beneath them, but it wasn't anybody's business if he meticulously bathed himself later. He'd still prove himself as a warrior either way. "May I guess your intention?" He was going to whether or not Coyotepaw allowed him, anyway, so he just nodded. "When you leapt at me, you wanted to beat me. That was all? Did you think, 'I must strike at his left side, because he favors it,' or something along those lines?"How in all of silverpelt would he know whether Heronpaw favored his left side or not. He did know, with confidence, that with enough force, all cats fell down eventually, though. That was information he could trust. Still, it was embarrassing to not have a better answer than, "Of course I wanted to beat you." That was the point of a fight, wasn't it? "How would I know what side you favor or anything else?"
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Post by tor on May 4, 2024 10:33:44 GMT -6
#s://i~ibb~co/G2gWhXV/heronpaw~jpg "Of course I wanted to beat you." Heronpaw blinked in response, amusement tickling his throat. He didn't smile, but thought the expression was clear enough, anyway. Coyotepaw was endearing. "How would I know what side you favor or anything else?""If you look at our pawprints, you can see my left side is heavier." Heronpaw flicked his tail toward a good set of prints as an example. "I have a small injury from an earlier spar." Nothing serious. He'd spent no more than half a day in the medicine cat den, making sure the sprain didn't develop into something worse. It'd been nearly a quarter moon since then. "If you look for evidence like this, it can help. You can also pay attention to how often your opponent comes at you from the left or right, or if they narrow one eye to focus their vision."All of these techniques were more advanced than what Coyotepaw needed. But he seemed curious, and Heronpaw wanted to feed that. "Come at me again. This time, your intention should be, 'I want to take advantage of his favored left side to knock him from the right.'"
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Post by adrian on May 4, 2024 11:24:23 GMT -6
#s://i~ibb~co/x79vLh0/coyotepaw~png Heronpaw didn't laugh at Coyotepaw's answer. He didn't gloat. He just explained the signs that - apparently - Coyotepaw should be looking for. He didn't know how to watch for those things. He relied on just his strength being enough at all times. It wasn't particularly elegant, but like... it worked. Often. Not always. "Come at me again. This time, your intention should be, 'I want to take advantage of his favored left side to knock him from the right.'"
Having an intention every time he made a move sounded exhausting. But Coyotepaw sighed and stepped back again to a starting position, at least willing enough to give it a try. He favors his left side? He could take advantage of that. Maybe knock him down from the right? Or something? With that thought in mind, he charged forward like the first time, rather than attempting to take air with a leap. Lacking the dexterity to really control or amend his blows, he crashed into him, swiping at his right leg to get him go down and then attempting to pin him from the left so he couldn't just spring back up again. He came in heavy, but well, a bigger apprentice would have no problem taking it, he thought. And... it worked. He didn't exactly get Heronpaw pinned as successfully as he would have liked, but he got him on the ground. Maybe... maybe with a little bit too much force. Heronpaw looked pained.
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Post by tor on May 4, 2024 11:35:03 GMT -6
#s://i~ibb~co/G2gWhXV/heronpaw~jpg Heronpaw's first mistake of the morning was expecting Coyotepaw to leap at him again. Instead, the younger apprentice charged, barreling into his right side with the strength of an ox. Air left Heronpaw's lungs in an ungraceful rush, causing him to hack and cough as Coyotepaw pinned him to the ground. It hurt. His back right leg, right where Coyotepaw struck, was apparently still recovering from his previous injury. Now it bloomed in a fiery pain. Desperate to maintain some composure, Heronpaw didn't struggle as Coyotepaw pinned him down. He let the other apprentice have his victory. Meanwhile, he closed his eyes tightly and bit his lip to stay quiet. The pain was spreading up his leg now, Coyotepaw's weight making it worse. He was heavier than Heronpaw expected. And much, much stronger, when he charged like that. Later, he would realize how foolish PrairieClan was being, not treating Coyotepaw as fairly as other apprentices. He was a gift, with strength like that. The clan needed him. Coyotepaw's mentor was snapping orders. Dimly, Heronpaw felt Coyotepaw's weight leave him. He tried to sit upright, but fell back to the ground, weakened by the pain in his leg. What was the warrior saying? Something about the medicine cat den? It was hard to hear, with the blood rushing to his head. Somehow, he managed to mumble a quick, "I'm fine."
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